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[ComiX Episode Three!]

Great Movie

Keep up the good work!

Love the series :)

But what a huuuuuuge filesize!

DAGamesOfficial responds:

thank you so much. look forward to more :P

[sherry enema: #1]

Funny dialog ^^

The dialog was very funny an I liked how you chose something that is talked about a lot in the christian society (I think :p).

I don't know why they talked with their chin, but that was funny anyway xD

Maybe try to add some more action, movement of hands/arms, because I lost my concentration after a while.

Cambo responds:

The hand and arm movement will probably happen in later episodes, but I want to avoid it for as long as possible. They don't have mouths as well, it was just a stylistic thing I wanted to try. When we talk our chins move as well so in a sense it's realistic (?)

[A Man and his Briefcase]

Haha, that was funny xD

I liked it!

But you should try to make the animations smoother by adding more frames in between (if you're working fbf that is ^^)!

Other than that, it's a nice and funny short!

HVN responds:

thnx for the comment. and yeah, i wish i could've done alot more better to make the animation to run smoother but like i say, we had only 2 and half months to pull it off. that's why it looks a bit choppy. thnx.

[Aerial Gunning]

Good concept

I likes the idea, and the animations were great, considering this being your first flash ever :)

Try adding more "inbetweens" in your animations, insert more frames, so everything looks smoother.

Music is great, so were the backgrounds.

Hope this makes you win your bet ;)

Draconianspirit responds:

lol. Actually my bet was that nobody would LIKE it xDD And I'm getting tens all over the place. ^^ But I'm not complaining. Thanks for your kind score.

Yeah it's been a while since I uploaded this and I'm still learning to get my animations nice and smooth. Thanks for the feedback ^^

[INKmen: "username"]

Story is good and funny but

this is 't a flash movie, it's just a bunch of pictures put in a certain order with a music file of a voice saying certain lines put on top.

1/5
4/10

Elios responds:

Yeah, i know, that was my intention. The simplicity of animation, with a hilarious punch-line.

[The Heart and the Hand p1]

Good job!

I really liked the way you only made them pronounce thinking-sounds or falling-in-love-sounds! It wasn't as direct as when you would have used language, but it's still very easy to understand!
Make more please! :)

Bobert-Rob responds:

Yes, the acting really is crucial when you use as little dialogue as I did here. Thankfully, I didn't do too bad and I had Rina-chan's help, so w00t for that. Thanks for the review! Oh, and I so totally will make more. Well, I'll make the second part. After that, who knows!

[Tooth Paste Man 2]

Oh my floss!

That was a fine movie! I really enjoyed it. I feel like .. brushing my teeth now!

Torrunt responds:

Good...good, then my plan for world domination is in effect! It's only a matter of time now.

[Inward Singing]

it made me cry!

you made use of far too many insulting words .. O'm very sensitive .. But I liked it! Hurray for inward singing!

MichaFrario responds:

That's Jack black ;)

[totally random fight]

Bit short but ..

very nice animations! I liked it!

Ace0fredspades responds:

Thanx I like it too